We showed our trailer to some of our target audience and gathered their responses, from this we were able to improve and develop our trailer to a higher standard.
- The narrative is unclear and sometimes confusing. The trailer is uncoventional for a comedy film, it includes funny scenes however the narrative style is poor and lacks a real storyline. However the editing is is good, and the use of cutting helps the trailer to flow.
- The storyline is badly thought out, it lacks real imagination. There is no real climax and the characters have nothing to work towards throughout the trailer. This trailer does not explain enough about the film and would not persuade me to go and watch it.
- I enjoyed the cutting between the scenes, it was very conventional for a comedy film. A few of the scenes included alot of comedy for example the 'Gangnam Style' scene. However the storyline could have been better as the narrative was very unclear.
- The trailer was well constructed however could have included more conventional ideas. The narrative and storyline isn't clear. The various settings and costumes used however are good as it gives it a sense of reality.
- Some of the scenes included were funny however the weren't really relevent and confused the storyline. Also the repeated bathroom scenes, although added comedy, didn't really fit in and had no real purpose within the narrative.
We have taken all this feedback on board and we're going to produce a new, clearer narrative and storyline to help make our trailer more conventional.
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